Friday, November 30, 2012

The Big Ride

This my Wheeeeeeeeeeeee writing!






I see the steepness of the big tower of terror, no one ever went on this ride and they say if you do you will never come back! But I just think it is a silly rumour. I look down it’s so so steep so so so so so steep I faint! 10 minutes later I wake up I can’t see anything all I can see is blurriness, it gets clearer I finally am able to see and now I am just going to get it over and done with, ok here I go, “ 1 2 “

“ Wait! Are you sure you want to do this? ” said Felicity.

“ Hey I didn’t know you were here.”

“ Well I am, so are you sure you want to do this? “

“ Yes I am sure. “

“ Ok but I warned you. “

Ok 3, 2,  1 GO!  Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, over the jump up and down up and down, this is like I am going as fast a vampire running. I am going soooooooooooo fast. I think for a second I’m going really fast and when I get to the end of the ride I will probably keep going and land in that prickle bush, I was so worried I forgot that I was already on the ride and I didn’t know where I was going “ ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh “ I screamed. Help me God Help me. I was almost at the end and I realised I was slowing down, the ride must slow down when you are about to get to the end. I stop at the end I look up I can see all the people cheering for me I feel so proud of myself and that was a big ride.

The next day I was in the newspaper because I was the first person to ever ride the tower of terror and now everyone is riding the tower of terror, but the only thing is my mum didn’t know I went on the ride because I told her that I was going to the library. “ Hey Parris “ said mum.
Oh no.

“ Yeah. “

Well I saw this kid in the newspaper and she was the first person to ride the tower of terror and I heard her name is Parris Petera.

I might of made a quick stop before the library. “ Parris you are grounded.

Ok!

3 comments:

  1. Hi Parris, you are far more braver than me. I quite like the rides but will happily watch others! We got trashed in assembly today with kea getting 5th for mostly everything. We'll be upping our game next year...have to! I cant even see our points on the board from the other side of the hall where I sit with room 11. Rather sad actually! Cheers Mrs Miller

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    1. Yes, go Kea 2013!

      Your writing is exciting and well structured, Parris. Just like Kea house will be in 2013 ;)

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    2. Thanks Mrs Miller and Mr.M.
      I love my writing and go Kea!

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