Sunday, May 20, 2012

BLOB



    




As you dodge, step and scream you look back and your classmates are trying to get free. Half of your class are chasing you like a tiger. I run and run trying to get free. Everyone's been blocked. 


“Oh no they run towards me.” They break apart. “Yay I can get free. I quickly run through the gap, while Mr. M is yelling out “get Parris.” Oh no! Someone's going to get me. I run. Joshua gets me, “oh no,” I say.

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8 comments:

  1. Great Pazza, your writing is short but it explains it all really well. What was your favourite part about playing BLOB?

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    1. My favourite part is when you get blocked and have to try and get free.

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  2. Cool Pazza!
    I like your vocaroo your voice is very clear.
    I also like the start it goes straight into the action.
    What is your favourite part of your writing?

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    1. Thanks for the positive comment Tash.

      My favourite part is the start, because there are 3 verbs.

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  3. Great ending Parris I loved part where you'er trapped but someone lets go and you try get through but in the end you get tagged.

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    1. Yeah that was the fun part, when I had to try and get free

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  4. Your voice recording is awesome, Parris.

    I enjoyed how you shared this writing at your interview :)

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