Wednesday, February 22, 2012

Summer time

Have you ever breathed summer?
you got out of the car and you could smell
summer the nice beautiful smell of summer.
Sure you have. That was summer!

Have you ever smelled the yuck compost
that looks uncomfortable and smells terribly
yuck. Ooh that was summer!

Have you ever felt rain start
to drip on you? Sure you have.
That reminds me remember that time
time when you went for a walk then it
started to rain. That was summer!

Remember that when you we’re
having a running contest, and when
you got the end you flopped down on
the grass, sure you have.That was summer!


  1. Hey everyone hope you like the story.

  2. The rain has dripped on us a lot this summer. I can feel and smell summer in your writing, Parris. Well done!

  3. Awesome story Parris I love the bit about the compost and it sure does smell yuck!!!

  4. Thanks Courtney.

  5. Annemarie Kupa-PeteraThursday, March 01, 2012

    What creative writing my sweetheart. You described summer very well.

  6. I have read your story its great